Elaina Poulos 10/21/18
Biology Honors Per. 3 Current Event Review
Fox, Maggie. “Why Is It so Hard to Figure out This Polio-like Illness Hitting Kids?”
NBCNews.com, NBCUniversal News Group, 21 Oct. 2018, 6:30 AM, www.nbcnews.com/health/health-news/why-it-so-hard-figure-out-polio-illness-hitting-kids-n922011.
I chose the article “Doctors are Struggling to Find a Cause of This Paralyzing Condition” from NBC News to write my current event review on. This article starts out by explaining to the readers that doctors are really baffled because of the uprise of this rare polio-like disease mainly found in children. The name of this illness is called acute flaccid myelitis (AFM). Then the article goes into saying that last year there were only a few amount of cases, but now for some unknown reason, it is on the rise. The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) made a statement that it’s currently investigating 127 reported cases and so far 62 of them have been confirmed to be acute flaccid myelitis in 22 states. The article includes a quote from Dr. Nancy Messonnier from the CDC, “We have not been able to find the cause of the majority of AFM cases. Despite extensive laboratory testing, we have not determined what pathogen or immune response caused the arm or leg weakness and paralysis in most patients. We don’t know who may be at a higher risk for developing AFM or the reasons why they may be at higher risk.” This response from Dr.Messonnier is scary because we really don’t know what causes this condition so we don’t know the steps a person can take to try to prevent it. It is also strange how the number rose so dramatically from the previous year. In addition, the article tells the viewers that the first wave of this illness occurred in 2014 with 386 cases, but not to panic since the chances of getting this disease is less than one million, so it is very rare. Also it is has been compared to polio, but Dr. Benjamin Greenberg who is an expert in rare neurological autoimmune disorders at the University of Texas claims that AFM is not causing the muscle weakness or paralysis to the degree polio did. Also the article explains that people are generally not tested for viruses therefore public health officials are not aware of what's going around. Doctors and public health officials can only really find out which viruses are going around until there is a widespread outbreak of a virus that forces people into hospitals. Despite this, in around 2014 there was speculation that the virus EV-D68 was the main cause of AFM, but doctors are not 100% sure with this answer because as the article states, “since 2014 there has not been any notable increases in cases of EV-D68, even as cases of AFM rise and fall.” The fact that we don’t know what’s responsible for AFM is bad since doctors don’t how to vaccinate people against it. Also we are not even aware if the cause of AFM is due to a virus. This articles also informs the readers about another concern of this disease which is the immune systems’ of most patients clear up the infection so by the time doctors run tests a specific viral cause does not appear. The CDC does want to be clear on one thing and that is none of the patients tested positive for polio. Symptoms of this disease are it usually starts out as a fever with a possible running nose, but then turns into weakness in the arm or leg with the dreaded droopy eyelid and face. To be clear the main telltale symptoms of this disease are weakness in the arm or leg (as in you can’t move it or can’t get up) and a droopy face. Lastly, as of now the only way to try to protect yourself from this scary disease is to wash your hands.
The content in this article is very relevant and is affecting our society now. There has been 62 cases recorded as of now of acute flaccid myelitis in 2018. Also the cases have been widespread, occurring in 22 different states in the US. Also as mentioned before this disease is frightening especially to young children (who are the most susceptible to this disease). It leaves some children partially paralyzed in places like their arms and legs. It is important that people are aware of this disease so they can take measures to protect themselves and their children. Also it is also important to know that you can develop this disease indirectly which makes it even more concerning. For example, if someone is bitten by a tick or mosquito and they develop either West Nile Virus, Jamestown Canyon Virus, Lacrosse virus, Powassan virus, St.Louis encephalitis, and Eastern equine encephalitis, they can eventually down the road develop AFM. You may ask how? Well as the article states “These viruses cause symptoms including encephalitis, a life-threatening inflammation of the brain; acute flaccid paralysis, which can include AFM and similar conditions; and meningitis.” People should know this so they can dress accordingly when they know they are in a place with a high concentration of ticks or mosquitoes. Even the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention which is a federal agency suggests that people should cover up and use repellent to prevent insect and tick bites. This disease is hurting our children and is paralyzing them. As of now, with what we know, this disease can affect anyone. So it is important to take the necessary precautions. Nobody wants to contract this horrible and scary polio-like illness.
I believe the article I read was very informational and well-written. I believe it provided me with useful information and it was written sophistically, but not to the point where it was difficult to read. The average person could read this article and definitely understand it. Another strength is was that it included real quotes from respected and educated officials such as Dr. Nancy Messonnier from the CDC and expert Dr. Benjamin Greenberg. I also liked how the author of this article included where the doctors were from and their place of occupation so we are aware of their background and know they are accredited individuals. The article was not too long to the point where it became boring and uninteresting to read, but it also wasn’t too short and brief. There are a few areas where this article could be improved such as I wish the author included more about AFM as in how does this disease cause arm and leg weakness. I was curious to find out so I had to look up the answer and it says that it targets the spinal cord which leads to arm and leg weakness and loss of muscle tone. Also as I reread the article I realize that it never states how there exists no cure or specific medical treatment which is true. It glosses over that part and may make some readers wonder “does a cure exist?”. The article does include how there exists no vaccination against it, but does not go in depth about how there is no cure. In addition, another weakness is the author doesn’t explain any possible treatment that could improve the lives of patients. I think the author, to improve the article, should have added that patients may seek physical or occupational therapy to improve their conditions. Lastly, I think this article should have ended with a proper conclusion. It ended with “This is why the CDC’s advice for preventing an infection that might lead to AFM is so general: wash your hands, and cover up and use repellent to prevent insect and tick bites.” An improvement I suggest is that the author should write a conclusion that sums up all the major topics that were discussed and that wraps up the piece. In conclusion, author Maggie Fox wrote a really nice and informative article explaining why it is so hard to figure out why acute flaccid myelitis is targeting kids.
Maya Brinster
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October 29, 2018
Current Event #6 - Comment
Fox, Maggie. “Why Is It so Hard to Figure out This Polio-like Illness Hitting Kids?”
NBCNews.com, NBCUniversal News Group, 21 Oct. 2018, 6:30 AM, www.nbcnews.com/health/health-news/why-it-so-hard-figure-out-polio-illness-hitting-kids-n922011.
For current event number six, I decided to read my classmate Elaina’s review on the article called “Doctors are Struggling to Find a Cause of This Paralyzing Condition” by Maggie Fox. Her writing is informative, and the large quantity of background information helps people understand everything about the article. This is important because readers can therefore get a clear idea of what is going on, and are able to understand the significance of the article and AFM (the condition) even better. I also like how Elaina uses quotes in her review. This backs up her information, which makes her arguments stronger and more reliable. Elaina also makes sure to provide reasons when listing ways the author could’ve written an even stronger article. This shows that she put much consideration into her points, and didn’t just quickly list things without showing how the author could improve upon her mistakes.
Although Elaina is an extremely strong writer, I do believe that there are some areas in which she can improve upon. Her review was very long, and I feel as if she should’ve written a more concise review by taking out unnecessary information. This would in fact make her writing even stronger and easier for readers to understand and navigate. I also feel as if Elaina could use more advanced diction in order to improve her writing. She uses elementary words such as “nice,” “bad” and “scary.” Although this might seem like a rather persnickety criticism, I do believe that more advanced words will make her writing seem more advanced. She can fix this issue by using sites such as Thesaurus to look for synonyms of basic words.
Overall, I really enjoyed reading Elaina’s work, and made me realize the impact the flaws in medicine. I previously knew that not everything can be cured, but after reading this I realized just how many people are affected by this. Because of this condition alone, 62 people have suffered this incurable illness. This information makes me wonder just how many people have been affected by all conditions or diseases that can’t be cured, and why there haven’t been any cures discovered yet. After reading this article, I have produced many questions and have become even more interested in the medical field. I am also looking forward to reading more of Elaina’s works.
Kathryn Haggerty
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Core Biology
November 4, 2018
Current Event Comment 7
Fox, Maggie. “Why Is It so Hard to Figure out This Polio-like Illness Hitting Kids?”
NBCNews.com, NBCUniversal News Group, 21 Oct. 2018, 6:30 AM, www.nbcnews.com/health/health-news/why-it-so-hard-figure-out-polio-illness-hitting-kids-n922011.
For this week's current event, i read Elaina’s review of “Doctors are Struggling to Find a Cause of This Paralyzing Condition,” by Maggie Fox. Overall, her writing was very descriptive and informative. In addition, she provided a lot of background inforrmation in order to help the reader fully understand the topic. This is important because as I read the article I really knew what i was reading about. This in turn helped me gather all fo the needed points not he given topic. Also, i like how elaina incorporated quotes into her review. This goes to show that she put time and effort into writing her review. In addition, it helps to prove the point she is putting across.
Even though Elian’s writing was done very well, she still had a few mistakes. First, Elaina use of vocabulary was very simple. In other words, her writing was very informative but she could’ve sold her point even more is she used more advanced diction. Secondly, her review was very long. In other words, after a whil of reading I began to get bored of the topic. If she were to shorten her review, she would be able to prove her point while keeping the writing to a minimum. Overall, I was unable to find any other mistakes in her writing.
In conclusion, Elaina did a great job on her review and I greatly enjoyed reading what she had to say. I never knew the true incentives of this diseases. In addition, the fact that it can not be cured really makes it so much worse. Overall, this just shows how their are things out their that could potentially lead to the end of mankind. Finally, I definitely plan on reading more Elaina’s work in the future for she did a great job and introduced me to something I never knew about before.
Olivia Conniff
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Core Bio 10H
11/28/18
Fox, Maggie. “Why Is It so Hard to Figure out This Polio-like Illness Hitting Kids?”
NBCNews.com, NBCUniversal News Group, 21 Oct. 2018, 6:30 AM, www.nbcnews.com/health/health-news/why-it-so-hard-figure-out-polio-illness-hitting-kids-n922011.
I decided to read Elaina’s review of the article, “Doctors are Struggling to Find a Cause of This Paralyzing Condition” by Maggie Fox, for this week. Elaina’s writing is extremely detailed, and includes a great deal of context on the subject which makes it clearer for the reader and helps them gain a better idea of what the article is talking about. This is important because readers are able to understand the importance of the article and the condition that it details. One other thing that was extremely helpful was how Elaina used many quotes from the article in her review. This gives backing to her claims, which gives strength to her arguments. Finally, Elaina successfully explained the essential idea of the article using clear and simple language, which is extremely important in a review of an article, as the reader needs to gain a basic understanding of what the article details.
While the review was well written over all, there are few areas that could be improved. First, I think Elaina could have expanded a bit more the points that she brought up in the second paragraph. Also, although her language was clear and simple, what would have made the review more clear would be if she made it slightly shorter, as it was a bit drawn out.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed Elaina’s review, and it caused me to fully realize the impact of in medicine. I knew that many things cannot be cured, but Elaina’s review truly helped me see just how people are actually affected by this. This review really made me think about the many, many people that affected by incurable ailments, and why cures for some of these things have not been discovered yet.