Mr.Ippolito
Current Event Review
12/11/16
Reynolds, Gretchen. "Keep It Moving." The New York Times. The New York Times, 09 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016.
In this article titled "Keep It Moving," by Gretchen Reynolds, she expresses the needs for exercise and the negative repercussions sitting and inactivity can have on a persons health. Physical inactivity has been correlated with six percent of all heart disease cases across the world and eleven percent of premature deaths in the United States. Physical activity is one of the factors that contributes to cancer and a way to help suppress the growth of cancerous tumors s by exercising. The American Journal of of Physiology — Endocrinology and Metabolism, was one of the first organizations to compare the differences from those whom are more active and those who sit for extended periods of time and still exercise. People who sit for long periods of time but do one day of intense exercise tend to not counter the affects long sitting may have on a person. Conversely walking frequently and working out regularly does suppress the risks. Researchers at the university of Texas at Austin asked seven healthy men to wear monitors and spend four days in a row being active and four days in a row being sedentary. On the active days the subjects sat on average for eight hours, and on the sedentary days they sat for approximately fourteen hours. On the fourth day they ran for about an hour and the following morning they had a high sugary breakfast. In their earlier studies they concluded that this workout led to significant drop in triglycerides, fats associated with heart disease that enter the bloodstream after meals. When the men were active and running their activity brought down the harmful risks they endured by consuming such a meal. However on their sedentary day the running did not bring down the high levels of triglycerides. ' “So much sitting seems to have made the men’s bodies exercise-resistant,” ' Coyle says, it was concluded that inactivity altered the men's metabolism that prevented it from breaking down fat.
This article connects to society because in today's world most of our time is spent sitting. Students sit for approximately 8 hours a day in very uncomfortable and not supportive seats. Even with recess and physical education to try to counter the harm they are doing to their bodies, we now know that it does nothing. The same goes for other professions where men and woman sit for long periods of time. Even those that exercise daily can now know that it doesn't matter as long as their not being proactive. Hopefully this will force people to consider changes in society's daily routine sponsoring more active activities and getting students to move more.
This article was very well written. It got right to the point not leaving a lot of un-answered questions. However the study that they conducted, doesnt seem to be adequate to me. They only tested 7 already fit men, instead of woman and people of different physiques. I think they should test men woman and adolescents of all different fitness' to see how the triglyceride levels react to the different genders and age groups.
Quin Madden
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Current Event Review
12/11/16
Reynolds, Gretchen. "Keep It Moving." The New York Times. The New York Times, 09 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016.
Sean wrote a spectacular review on the article, "Keep It Moving”. Sean did a great job of breaking down all the information and made it easy for the reader to understand what was going on in the article. He gave distinct details that helped give insight on how this research is correct and how actually works. Sean didn't just state facts she often gave examples after a claim that he gave. For example, he included information gathered by the researchers at the University of Texas. I like how he gave examples on how the article could be written better.
Even though he had a great review, there are still things that could have been in her current event review. I wish she had quoted the test more, so we could actually see what the researchers are saying and not just what Sean is saying. If he added qoutes it would give the reader the reassurance that what she is saying really exist. Sean should add two more quotes on why the discovery is so important.
In conclusion, I thought this article was very interesting, Sean had a great summary, and review on "Keep It Moving”. I find that this new invention could help many people with better
Samantha Huss
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D Block Odd
12/12/16
Current Event Comment
Reynolds, Gretchen. "Keep It Moving." The New York Times. The New York Times, 09 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016.
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/12/09/well/move/keep-it-moving.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fhealth&action=click&contentCollection=health®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront
Sean's review of the article, “Keep it Moving,” by Gretchen Reynolds was overall well done. He did a great job of summarizing the article and making it clear what the article is covering and how it is important. He also did a great job of providing evidence to support his claims. Finally, Sean's review also had a very good section of how it related to and connects to society. He provided many examples as explained his thinking very well to help the reader better understand.
Although overall the review is very well done, Sean's review could change a few aspects to help make it better. For example, he could change up his repeated words and fix a few grammatical errors to help better the review. Also, his summary paragraph was very long and detailed while his second two paragraphs could have been lengthened. This would add to the structure and organization of the review to make it feel more complete.
This review was very well done and it was interesting to find out exactly how much exercise and a good amount of motion helps to maintain good health. Specifically, it shocked me to find out that one's amount of physical activity corresponds to one’s risk for some cancers. This review was overall very good and interesting to read.
After reading Sean’s response to an article titled, "Keep it Moving,” I learned a lot of important information. One of the things that makes this response thorough is its use of quotes to support evidence. In addition, Sean addressed many of the experts who backed this research up. This included Professor Leeman from the University of Arizona who found that sitting for extended periods of time can be harmful. Finally, Sean gives a large amount of context so that readers can better understand the subject that is being talked about in this article.
ReplyDeleteAlthough I believe that this response was written thoroughly, there are some minor flaws that can be addressed. There are a few punctual errors around some of the quotations which are minor, but can be fixed. In addition, I found that the use of quotes could sometimes be out of place, and a bit random when placed in the response. Regardless, this response is still very thorough as it informs the reader about the article and what the article could have done better.
From reading this response, I learned that there are many hazards with sitting for too long and it is important to get up and move often. This problem affects students especially because we have to sit through long classes without getting up once for hours. Also, this article shows that exercise will not reverse the effects of sitting for too long.
Thomas Bender
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Biology
4 January 2017
Reynolds, Gretchen. "Keep It Moving." The New York Times. The New York Times, 09 Dec. 2016. Web. 4 Jan. 2017.
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/12/09/well/move/keep-it-moving.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fhealth&action=click&contentCollection=health®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront
Sean’s review of the article “Keep it Moving” by Gretchen Reynolds is very good. To start off with, Sean chose a good, interesting article from a reputable source. By doing this, Sean was able to write a far more interesting review. Secondly, he supported all of his claims with an appropriate amount of evidence. And lastly, Sean made fantastic use of the data found in the article.
That being said, the data that is used is not easily understood. An example of this is when he mentions “ Physical inactivity has been correlated with six percent of all heart disease cases across the world and eleven percent of premature deaths in the United States” he does not translate the percentages into actual numbers, if added these numbers are far more impactful than the ordinary percentages. An example of this is that the 11% of the U.S. that was stated, translates into about 35,079,00 people. Another problem that Sean ran into is that he has a few typos such as the example “ tumors s by exercising” because of this it is easy to conclude that the review was not proofread.
This review taught me a fair deal about the dangers of physical inactivity, and so it will be an inspiration for me to take part in physical activity in times where i would rather sit down.
Zip Malley
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CoreBioH / Current Review #2 Comment
9 February 2017
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/12/09/well/move/keep-it-moving.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fhealth&action=click&contentCollection=health®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=sectionfront
Reynolds, Gretchen. "Keep It Moving." The New York Times. The New York Times, 09 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016.
This review of Gretchen Reynolds’ New York Times article titled “Keep It Moving” by classmate Sean Sullivan, was thoroughly examined and explained. His report covered the need for exercise and the negative effects taken on a human if they are not active. This article explains that six percent of all heart disease cases are directly correlated with physical inactivity and that sitting for too long can really mess with a person’s health. Sean did an excellent job explaining the article definitely giving sufficient evidence from the article. Sean also did an amazing job referencing all of the experts involved in the experiment such as Professor Leeman from the University of Arizona. Sean also explained the article very well, not only explaining what happened but also giving context and background information giving the reader a better sense as to what the article explained.
Sean wrote this review very well, however he lacked some things in his review. Sean repeated many words throughout his review. Without these repetitions, the review would have been a bit better. Sometimes in Sean’s review, he added in quotes which, in some cases, are out of place. These quotes made the review, in some cases, confusing.
In the review, I found it crazy that sitting for too long can really mess with a person’s body and their mental state. This review really made me realize how important exercise is for a human.