Current Event #8
Core Bio // Mr. Ippolito
Norah Foley
April 16th, 2017
Worland, Justin. "Toxic Air Pollution Can Penetrate the Brain: Study." Time. Time, 06 Sept.
2016. Web. 06 Sept. 2016.
http://time.com/4480016/air-pollution-health-effects/
The article I read was entitled “Toxic Air Pollution Can Penetrate the Brain: Study” by Justin Worland. In the articled, Worland addresses how air pollution remains a major global health threat that contributes to many more degenerative diseases than previously thought. According to new research the toxic effects of pollution reach well beyond just cardiovascular diseases. Based on research from a new study published in the Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences, pollution also appears to be a contributing factor to brain maladies, such as Alzheimer's. Researchers found that toxic particles of magnetite and other metals which makes up the much of the pollution in urban areas, are actually able to permeate the brain through the olfactory nerve. These substances have been found in high levels of brain tissue taken from people who had previously resided in heavily polluted cities. The author believes this research now shows how the pollution can enter the human body and cause the disease, although he does note that more research will be necessary to show the exact cause and effect.
This is problematic, since according to the World Health Organization, over 80% of people in urban societies reside in areas where air quality is well below current health standards. According to this article air pollution is linked to a variety of health issues, including millions of premature deaths yearly, throughout the world. It has long been a problem in cities that are heavily polluted such as in third world countries like India, but now it seems to also be affecting areas that are proactively fighting pollution, such as in Europe and the United States. It affects our lives here in Bronxville, because we are located just outside a major city. We breath the same air and it appears based on this article, that even small amounts are able to “infiltrate” the human body and wreak havoc on one’s health. Now that we are gaining a greater understanding of how pollution can permeate the body, we need to focus more on ways to prevent it from doing so.
I found this article to be very interesting since toxic air pollution affects so much of humanity. However, it covered this topic in very general terms, raising a lot of unanswered questions. The author often stated that “research shows” that pollution contributes to degenerative brain diseases without giving specific examples or sources for his theories. He asserts that pollution “infiltrates” the brain through the olfactory nerve, but has not detailed exactly why he makes this claim, other than that it was found in the brain tissue of individuals from heavily polluted cities, like Mexico City and Manchester. It leaves me to question whether there could be other ways that pollution could end up in the brain tissue. Maybe it traveled in the person’s bloodstream when that person drank contaminated water or food? Could the magnetite or other metals somehow be absorbed by the skin, similar to lead poisoning? Leaving these questions unanswered was frustrating to me as a reader, however with more research these questions could possibly be answered.
Olivia Doyle
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Core Biology
23 April 2017
Worland, Justin. "Toxic Air Pollution Can Penetrate the Brain: Study." Time. Time, 06 Sept.
2016. Web. 06 Sept. 2016.
http://time.com/4480016/air-pollution-health-effects/
This week, I read my classmate Norah’s review of the article titled “Toxic Air Pollution can Penetrate the Brain”. The article discusses the effects of air pollution as a major global health threat. Norah’s summary of the article was very well structured and allowed the reader to understand a claim through examples shown by research. Norah was careful to include every detail and statistic the article gave, which greatly enhanced her argument and overall review. She clearly states the author’s opinion on what he believes the research shows. Lastly, Norah gave a wonderful description of how this issue affects humanity, using specific statistics. For example, she says “This is problematic, since according to the World Health Organization, over 80% of people in urban societies reside in areas where air quality is well below current health standards.” This gives the reader a good idea of how much of the population air pollution affects and why this is such a major threat.
Although Norah’s article was very well-written, there were some areas that needed to be improved on. For one, Norah could have included quotes from the article rather than paraphrasing every paragraph. This would have further strengthened her argument. Although Norah gave a strong analysis of what the author could improve on, she does not discuss what the author did well and what she liked about the article. This leads the reader to believe that Norah entirely disliked this article and what it discussed. It would be important for her to include the article’s personal impact on her and what she gained from it.
I found this article to be quite interesting and shocking, as I knew previously that air pollution was harmful to our health but did not know it could penetrate the brain. I thought that the study done on people in Mexico City and Manchester was fascinating- the fact that scientists found toxic magnetite and other metals in people's brains who resided in urban areas directly shows that pollution negatively affects us. I am eager to research more on the statistics of air pollution, especially in New York City as that directly affects us.
My classmate Norah did a current event on how toxic air pollution can penetrate the brain. The whole review was very interesting, and I was very surprised that it can lead to degenerative diseases. I knew that it could lead to cardiovascular problems because you breath it in, but I never knew that these effects could travel to the brain. I was also shocked that less than 80% of people in urban areas have air quality below the standard, which means they are more susceptible to these harmful diseases. Finally, thought that it was shocking that these particles, such as magnetite, can permeate the brain through the olfactory nerve.
ReplyDeleteOverall, the review was very well written, but there were some parts that left me confused. For example, when talking about the olfactory nerve I thought she could describe that nerves function, just for context. I also thought she could include some of the research into her review.
Finally, this was a very insightful article. I didn't realise how much air quality can affect people. Its also shocking that the air could affect us even though we’re away from the city. This article really expanded my thinking, and I will definitely read into this more in the future.
Worland, Justin. "Toxic Air Pollution Can Penetrate the Brain: Study." Time. Time, 06 Sept.
2016. Web. 06 Sept. 2016.
http://time.com/4480016/air-pollution-health-effects/
Olivia Conniff
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Bio 10H
10/21/18
Worland, Justin. "Toxic Air Pollution Can Penetrate the Brain: Study." Time. Time, 06 Sept.
2016. Web. 06 Sept. 2016.
http://time.com/4480016/air-pollution-health-effects/
This week I chose to read the Article Reviews done by Norah Foley of the article, “Toxic Air Pollution Can Penetrate the Brain: Study”, by Justin Worland. This article was about how toxic air pollution can penetrate and affect the brain in drastic ways. The article and review shocked me because I learned a great deal about toxic air pollution and how it can lead to degenerative diseases in the brain as well as cardiovascular diseases. I already knew that heart problems could arise due to unhealthy air quality however I was unaware of the effects that this air quality can have on the brain. This article also informed that these dangerous particles in the air can penetrate the brain through the olfactory nerve. I was also unaware that over 80% of people in urban areas are living with air quality that is unhealthy by standard, meaning they are more likely to contract diseases of the brain or heart.
I think Norah did an excellent job with this review. She successfully explained the essential idea of the article using clear and simple language. Furthermore, she gave helpful and constructive criticisms that the author of the article could use to better their writing. Norah also did a great job of explaining how this new information impacted her, and what she wants to learn about after reading it. She clearly showed an in depth understanding of what the author intended for the reader to take away from the article.
For the most part, this review was very well written, but there were a few minor things that could be improved upon. First, I thought that Norah should have included a bit more background information. I would have understood the article a lot better if there was more background information about things such as the magnetite in the air as well as the olfactory nerve. Next, I feel that the review would be a lot stronger if there was research written in the actual study that the article is about in the review. If there were quotes from the study I would be able to better understand what was learned from the research.
I found this article to be extremely insightful. I did not know how much the air quality that people are living in can affect them. This article taught me a great deal about how toxic air pollution can affect the brain, and I will definitely stay informed about precautions that I can take to protect myself from diseases.
Alex Doukas
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Biology
December 14, 2018
Worland, Justin. "Toxic Air Pollution Can Penetrate the Brain: Study." Time. Time, 06 Sept.
2016. Web. 06 Sept. 2016.
http://time.com/4480016/air-pollution-health-effects/
This week i decided to read the article review written by Nora that is titled “Toxic Air Pollution can Penetrate the Brain”. The article depicts how air pollution has remained a very major global health threat around the world. Norah incorporated numerous examples from the text that concluded the reader to gain a better understanding of her summary of the article. She included these examples throughout the whole text which again made the comprehension of the article easy to understand and make the article itself very appealing. She also described how it personally affects her and the town she lives in. Incorporating your personal opinion and the effects this certain issue has on your own life is interesting and very important to include so that was a great decision she made while writing this review.
Although Norah wrote a very appealing and well written review, some areas of improvement are needed throughout. I think that if Norah included quotes from the article, it would have given the reader a better feel of the article and with that a better understanding of the essential points that she described in the article. Norah also included the relation of this topic to her hometown and described what affects it could have in that specific point, but she didn't include her overall opinion on the article so it gave me the reason to conclude that she just wrote this review on a random topic she didn't find that interesting.
Overall, I found this article very interesting. My understanding of air pollution was very clear and I was aware of how harmful it is to the environment, but I never fully understood how much it impacted the human body. I chose this article for that reason exactly, I wanted to learn about something I wasn't very familiar with so i broaden my knowledge. As I said it my previous paragraphs, Norah included the fact that it could affect hometowns, especially mine because of its close proximity to the city, so that point provided me with more insight and makes me eager to learn more about this specific topic.