Sarah Goodell
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Core Bio: Current Event Review
22 April, 2017
Current Event #9
Griffiths, James. "Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away." CNN. Cable News Network, 06 Jan. 2017. Web. 22 Apr. 2017.
James Griffiths, from CNN, wrote an outstanding article, titled “Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away,” on how an international team of researchers has finally located a mysterious signal three billion light-years away. In 2007, fast radio bursts, or FRBs, were first discovered, yet scientists were unable to narrow down their precise location. One signal in particular, one that scientists had long believed originated from within the Milky Way itself, is unique compared to the other 17 FRBs that have been found. This signal has finally been traced to a spot more than three billion light-years away, located in the dwarf galaxy in the pentagon-shaped constellation called Auriga. In 2012, scientists at Cornell discovered that this specific signal had been “repeating sporadically.” Although they do not believe that these radio bursts result from extraterrestrial life, scientists do believe that they may be coming from neutron stars, which are formed after a supernova explosion, or from a black hole at the center of this galaxy. As Shami Chatterjee, a researcher at Cornell University, said, “We think it may be a magnetar -- a newborn neutron star with a huge magnetic field, inside a supernova remnant or a pulsar wind nebula -- somehow producing these prodigious pulses.” These are the two most common explanations for FRBs, yet Brian Butler, of the National Radio Astronomy Observatory, has brought up a good point. Butler has told CNN, “We do have to keep in mind that this FRB is the only one known to repeat, so it may be physically different from the others.” Because this FRB has had a history of repeating occurrences, we may not have any idea as to what this FRB is resulting from.
Since scientists are still unsure and unaware about what is causing these radio signals, it is hard to know anything for fact. These developments, however, have given way for more exploration, more experimentation, and new hypotheses to be formed on the basis of this data. For scientists, this topic is still very premature and could quickly develop with improved technology. These discoveries could prove to be something we have never seen before within our galaxy, and could lead to further space travel and exploration. For us on Earth, we should be open and willing to new and different possibilities on where these radio signals may be coming from.
The author, James Griffiths, has done an incredible job writing this article and has successfully supported his statements by including photographs, drawings, and quotes from researchers and scientists themselves. Through his use of quotes, Griffiths has established himself as a credible source for information. Griffiths has also effectively presented his findings in an article format, while at the same time being able to successfully influence and persuade his audience. However, by the end of his article, Griffiths still had left some unanswered questions for the readers. For example, he discussed how “extraterrestrial intelligence is not near the top of the list of explanations,” regarding the radio signal, but failed to tell us why there is a very slim chance that this is a possibility. Also, Griffiths could have organized his article more fluently. Instead of jumping right into the data and beginning to analyze it, Griffiths first should have introduced what is known about this mysterious signal, and then gone ahead into his findings. To improve upon both of these things, Griffiths can try to structure his report in a smoother way, in order to provide his audience with more information ahead of time. This way, his readers will be well-informed before he even begins to discuss the possibilities of this mysterious signal. He can also try to answer some of the simple, unknown questions that his audience was left with at the end of his article.
Alisa Fominykh
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Biology 10H D Odd
May 3, 2017
Griffiths, James. "Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away." CNN. Cable News Network, 06 Jan. 2017. Web. 22 Apr. 2017. .
For this current events assignment I chose to read my classmate, Sarah Goodell’s summary and critique on the article, “Mysterious Radio Signal Trace to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away” by James Griffiths. In Sarah’s summarization of the article she states that a team of international researchers detected a signal from a location over three billion light years away. Originally radio bursts were detected as early as 2007 however, only recently have their original location been determined. Scientists do not think they are coming from extraterrestrial life, instead they are most likely coming from neutron stars that are formed following the explosion of a supernova. The significance of this being that although it does not hint at extraterrestrial life, this finding does allow for more knowledge to be gained in regard to our universe and specifically our galaxy. Sarah does a good job stressing the relevance of such a discovery, since I as the reader even after learning it does not pertain to extraterrestrial life still have understood the importance. Additionally, Sarah did a good job writing the review since it was both clear of typographical errors and flowed smoothly. Finally, her usage of smaller quotes further helped back up the points made in the article thus once more making her critique interesting.
Overall her review was nicely done however, I think it would have been interesting if she addressed if any scientists believed this signals were coming from extraterrestrial life despite the fact most did not believe so. Since this is a topic many individuals are interested in, including myself. Finally, I believe her review could have been improved by potentially a bit more outside research to fill in any of the questions which arose as a result of the article’s author living out potentially necessary details.
I chose this current event to review upon since as I stated before I initially read the headline anticipating some form of revelation in regards to extraterrestrial life, since the idea of it existing is engaging. However, after reading the article I was still interested in this topic since ultimately any expansion on knowledge which relates to science is intriguing and important.
Catie Burnell
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Core Biology Honors
May 3, 2017
My classmate Sarah Goodell wrote a review on the article “Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away” by James Griffiths of CNN. One great detail that immediately stood out to me from Sarah’s work was how she gave a short summary of the main point of the article in the first sentence of her review. As a reader, this gave me some insight immediately and made me interested to read the rest of the review. Additionally, Sarah included several excellent quotes in her review. Sarah also did a great job explaining how she felt the author could improve upon his writing, which showed she carefully analyzed the article and read closely for details.
While Sarah’s review was overall well-done, there are a couple of things she could improve upon. For instance, it would have been great if Sarah had clarified what fast radio bursts are as I didn’t know from reading her review. Also, I think it would have been beneficial for Sarah to include more context on previous similar advancements and findings to relate to the topic of her review. Nonetheless, Sarah’s review was very well-written and comprehensive.
The main point that interested me in this article was the fact that the fast radio burst, or FRB, that was at the subject of the article was the first known FRB to repeat. This truly shows how much knowledge is left to gain about the workings of outer space, and also shows how quickly the technology to gain this knowledge is advancing. The article was a fascinating read and Sarah did a great job reviewing it.
Griffiths, James. "Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away." CNN. Cable News Network, 06 Jan. 2017. Web. 2 May 2017.
Marina Alfano
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5/2/17
Current Event 10
Griffiths, James. "Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away." CNN.
Cable News Network, 06 Jan. 2017. Web. 22 Apr. 2017.
http://www.cnn.com/2017/01/04/world/dwarf-galaxy-radio-burst/index.html
My classmate Sarah Goodell wrote a well written review on the article titled “Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away”, published by CNN. In her summary of the article, Sarah mentions how researchers have discovered a radio signal coming from millions of light years away and they were first discovered in 2007 but it took them 10 years to find the exact location in which they were coming from. Sarah did a good job explaining to the reader what the researchers had discovered and why it was significant, and she talked about all of the possible things that could be causing the radio signals. In her review, Sarah did an excellent job stressing the importance of this new finding and how it impacts our knowledge of the universe. I also appreciated that Sarah took the time to read the article thoroughly and point out all of the flaws that she saw, when he mentioned all of the questions that the author left unanswered.
Although Sarah did a good job writing her review, there were a few minor changes that she could implement to make her point even more clear to the reader. One thing I would have liked is having slightly more outside information on the questions that Sarah mentioned had been unanswered by the article. Second, she could explain what the radio signals look like, and what an FRB actually is which she never addressed in her review. Other than these two minor changes, Sarah wrote a clear and organized summary of the article.
I chose to read Sarahs review because after learning about radio waves in earth science, I was interested in the topic and wanted to learn more. I found it amazing how this radio signal is the first FRB that repeats, which shows how much we have to learn and how little we know about things beyond our own universe. I will definitely look out for any updates on this topic, because I am sure that soon researchers will understand what is the cause of the signals.
Luke Redman
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5/10/17
Griffiths, James. "Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away." CNN.
Cable News Network, 06 Jan. 2017. Web. 22 Apr. 2017.
http://www.cnn.com/2017/01/04/world/dwarf-galaxy-radio-burst/index.html
Susie Goodell wrote a great review on an article by James Griffiths titled “Mysterious Radio Signal Traced to Dwarf Galaxy Light-years Away.” Sarah does a great job on explaining the researcher’s findings and how they acquired the data. She also emphasised how long it took the researchers to find the radio signal, which was 10 years. She also did an amazing job on explaining how this finding would affect our knowledge of space and the universe. Although she wrote well in her review, there were a few changes that could have been made in order to make the review even better. I wish she had included more details on the radio signal itself and why it was more unique than the others. Another point I thought that she could improve on is elaborate on the questions left out by the author, so we could either ponder them for ourselves or at least recognize that they were asked. I really enjoyed reading Susie’s review and I had never know that there were radio signals coming from that deep in outer space. I look foward to reading others