Sunday, December 11, 2016

That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail. The New York Times.

Sarah Whitney
Mr. Ippolito
Biology D-Even
11 December, 2016

St, Nicholas. "That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail." The New York Times. The New York Times, 08 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016. <http://www.nytimes.com/2016/12/08/science/dinosaur-feathers-amber.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=2&pgtype=sectionfront>.

    In 2015, Lida Xing found a remarkable artifact. He found a feathered tail of a dinosaur in what looked like golden glass. Turns out it was trapped in amber which preserved the soft tissue and eight vertebrae. The bones are what indicated that the feathered tail belonged to a dinosaur and not a bird. This also helped in the research in the evolution of feathers. Dr. Xing and his colleagues performed a CT scan which revealed that the vertebrae were not merged into a rod unlike modern birds. Due to this discovery, these scientists infer that the tail belonged to dinosaur that was similar to a T-rex but think that it was only the size of a sparrow. The reason the tissue, bones, and feathers were preserved for so long is because the dinosaur’s body was most likely covered in tree resin after death which can harden into a plastic-like substance(amber) that can last for millions of years. Dr. McKellar, an amber expert was puzzled after looking at the feather structure under a microscope. Modern birds have something called a rachis which can be compared to a stem of a plant. Branching out from the rachis are barbs, and off barbs, barbules. What left Dr. McKellar confused is that the feathers of the dinosaur did not have a rachis. Dr. McKellar stated, “It shapes our view of how feathers came to develop in modern birds, and it gives us a rare glimpse of what dinosaurs looked like and potentially what feathers were being used for in the mid-Cretaceous.” These findings propose that barbs and barbules evolved before the rachis. This also leads scientists to believe that this species of dinosaur could not fly since the rachis aids in flight. Mark Norell, a paleontologist stated that there is no question that the feathers belonged to a nonavian theropod dinosaur which cannot fly as opposed to a prehistoric bird.
    This article is relevant because it helps scientists study the evolution of feathers and also gives people more insight into the study of dinosaurs. “The feathers most likely belonged to a baby nonavian theropod, meaning it looked more similar to a velociraptor or Tyrannosaurus rex than to a modern bird. That said, it was probably only about the size of a sparrow.” This statement may lead readers to believe that sparrows or other birds evolved from this species. Also the realization that rachis came after barbs and barbules can open multiple other studies on the structure of feathers and how they emerged.
    This article had many strengths, first, it gave a clear and consistent summary that clearly explained the importance of this discovery. Also it was different from other articles because it described the role of each scientist to help differentiate them. Though there were strengths, there were also a couple weaknesses. First, the article did not explain what some things were. For example, Mark Norell mentioned a “nonavian theropod dinosaur” which many people may not know what it is. Also the article says “central shaft called a rachis; think of the ink rod in a quill pen.” This can be an unclear example for people who do not know what a quill pen looks like and can leave them confused on what a rachis is. Improvements that can be added to strengthen this article are to give clear definitions of words that many people may not know and to maybe find a way to connect the topic with modern day research or discoveries.

4 comments:

  1. Bridget Sands
    Mr. Ippolito
    Core Bio H
    12/12/16


    Citation found on review with hyperlink:


    St, Nicholas. "That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail." The New York Times. The New York Times, 08 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016. .


    I read my classmate Sarah’s review on “That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It was a Dinosaur Tail. The New York Times”. Throughout her review, there were many good components as well as some areas of improvement. Sarah excelled in her explanation of amber, and how it is able to preserve different materials. She explained that because of the Amber the tail didn’t become a complete fossil, for the soft tissue and feathers were preserved. She also explained the relevance to society now very well, for she explained that the discovery of this amber-coated feather helps in the evolution of feathers, and evolution overall. She claims that it helps scientists with dinosaurs, because it has been determined that the wing is one of something closer to a T-Rex or a Velociraptor, rather than a prehistoric bird of some sort. Finally, Sarah was very clear when she explained the way in which they tested the wing of feathers. She told that it went through a CT scan, which then revealed that the vertebrae was not like the modern birds today, but more like a dinosaur, which as mentioned before, helped determine that it was not a prehistoric bird.
    Although Sarah constructed a well-written report, there were some clear areas of improvement. There was some key information missing from the review. There were some terms that she did not define, which caused me, as the reader, to not fully understand certain sections of the paper. Such terms include “barbs” and “barbules”. Under the same category, she also did not give the place where the wing was found, when it was found, what time period it may be from, nor what specific animal it could be from. These are key parts of information required for a better understanding of both the paper overall but the discovery in general that were left out. Lastly, the citation of her paper was incorrect. The hyperlink should not be bold and she neglected to include the correct last name of the author, Fleur, in her citation.
    When reading Sarah’s paper, I had an “ah-ha” moment. This was the instant when I realized that amber could be used as a preservation tool. This intrigued me because I am curious what else has been saved from the past from it, and not to mention what will be saved by it in the future.

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  2. Ellie Parson 12/11/16


    Citation For Article (from Sarah Whitney):
    St, Nicholas. "That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail." The New York Times. The New York Times, 08 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016.
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    Citation For Review:
    Whitney, Sarah. "That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail. The New York Times." Rev. of The Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail. n.d.: n. pag. The New York Times. 8 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016.


    Comment:
    Sarah Whitney wrote a remarkable review on “That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail” by Nicholas St. Fleur. Recently in the year of 2015, a part of amber was found, and encased inside of it was a tail of a dinosaur, including feathers. This discovery could help scientists understand the history of the change of feathers from the 99 million years ago, the purpose of the feathers, and appearance of dinosaurs. One factor in which Sarah had success was using detail and a comparison to help the reader understand certain terms, such as barbules. As one may not hear that word everyday, Sarah combined other term names and compared the rachis to an object people are familiar with, a plant stem, to . She may not have traditionally defined the term, but a reader could still comprehend what she means. Another part she did well in was including quotes in her summary, critique, and relevance paragraphs. By taking out parts from the article in quotes, the reader can understand which sections of the article she is referencing when she is making a point. Additionally, some points that Sarah made in her critique were agreeable and insightful. She quoted words from the article and used them as proof to show that there was a lack of definition for some terms in the article. Not everyone may be able to fathom what words such as nonavian mean. This critique shows that Sarah is able to highlight words that may be hard to understand, and therefore bring justice for those who do not know the meanings of those words.
    As she did well, Sarah also had areas she could have bettered. Concerning the ways she quoted the article, it may not be according to MLA formatting rules. After the last quotation makes but before the period that ends the sentence, Sarah could have included a pair of parenthesis with the author’s name first and the page number second within them. In her critique, Sarah noticed that parts of the article were not explained as well as they could have been. However, she did not offer definitions to those unexplained words. It could have aided those who did not know what certain words meant if she gave a solution to those errors with descriptions.
    Outside of choosing this review because it was on the website, I saw an example of amber holding ancient creatures. The encasing a specimen inside of amber is almost like a gift from the prehistoric planet earth. In the present, scientists lean on the dead organisms inside of the tree sap to learn more about what creatures roamed the earth a long before they were alive. It the amber to credit for discoveries such as this one. Amber is not only beautiful, but it serves a great purpose in the world of science.

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  3. My classmate Sarah wrote a review on the article, “That thing with Feathers trapped in amber? It was a dinosaur tail. The New York Times.” . A researcher found a feathered tail of an animal in amber in 2015. I thought my classmate Sarah did a great job writing her review. One reason I think this is because she did a good job relating her topic to society when she told the readers how the feather they found could help with understanding the evolutions of feathers. Another thing I think Sarah did well was was how she was able to critique the author by saying that “the article didn’t explain some things” . Also Lindsey did a great job explaining how they tested the feather and how the machines work. She told the readers how the feathers were put through a CT scan that revealed that the tail was not like those in birds today.
    Although I think Sarah did a great job overall on her current event review, I still think there are some things she could do to improve her review. One thing I think Sarah could have done to improve her review is she could have included specific quotes from the article instead of just explaining the topic to the reader. If she had done this I think that the review would be given more credibility because the quotes could have backed up her claims. Another way for Sarah to improve her review is that she could have credited the author in the beginning of the article so readers wouldn’t have to go to the citation, or the website to find out who wrote the article.
    Overall, I think Sarah’s review was very good and she covered an important and relevant topic. Now that I have read this article I am very excited to find more about dinosaurs and what they looked like. I am also excited for people to find more discoveries like this.

    Citation:
    http://www.nytimes.com/2016/12/08/science/dinosaur-feathers-amber.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=2&pgtype=sectionfront

    St, Nicholas. "That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail." The New York Times. The New York Times, 08 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016

    http://bhscorebio.blogspot.com/2016/12/that-thing-with-feathers-trapped-in.html#comment-form

    D, Sarah-Bio Block. "That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail. The New York Times." That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail. The New York Times. N.p., 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 19 Dec. 2016.

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  4. Tommy Purdy
    Mr. Ippolito
    Biology D-Odd
    20 December 2016

    That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail. The New York Times.
    St, Nicholas. "That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail." The New York Times. The New York Times, 08 Dec. 2016. Web. 11 Dec. 2016. .

    My classmate, Sarah, did a very good job reviewing The New York Times article, “That Thing With Feathers Trapped in Amber? It Was a Dinosaur Tail.” One part of her review that she did very well was her summary. Sometimes summaries are too long or too short, Sarah’s however, was in the middle and just right. One part of the summary that I thought she did very well was mentioning all of the scientists involved such as Dr. Xing and Dr. McKellar. Another aspect of Sarah’s review that is very well done is her critique paragraph. One part that specifically stood out in the critique paragraph when she starts mentioning that not many people would know what a “nonavian theropod dinosaur” is. By Sarah saying this, it proves that she has a good enough understanding of the article she read that she can critique very specific parts about it, rather than just saying if it was overall good or bad. Another aspect that is very well done by Sarah is her ability to make the reader properly understand what she is talking about. For example, Sarah says, “This also leads scientists to believe that this species of dinosaur could not fly since the rachis aids in flight.” By Sarah saying this, it proves that she wants to make the reader clear about what a rachis is, because not many would originally know.
    Though Sarah’s review is mostly good, there are a couple areas that could use improvement. One aspect that could use improvement is her relevance paragraph. The relevance paragraph is only 10 lines, which is way too small compared to the summary paragraph which is almost twice that. Sarah does not seem to be able to properly explain herself in 10 lines. Though she does claim her points about how it is relevant to today's society, she does not back up her claim with an explanation. To fix this, Sarah could add some explanation parts into her relevance paragraph. Another aspect that could be better is he word choice. Throughout the review, Sarah does not use many complicated words at all and stays to the rather simple words. This makes the review feel a little tedious and simple to read. To fix this, Sarah could add a bit more complicated words and make the sentences longer and more detailed.
    After finishing reading Sarah’s review, I now feel that I have learned a lot about dinosaurs history than I originally knew. I thought that it is really interesting that people can learn things such as if a dinosaur can fly or not based on looking at if there is just one bone or not. This perfection to detail and understanding of bones really intrigues me. I chose to read Sarah’s review because I have always been interested in dinosaurs. The thing that interests me the most about them is that they lived millions of years ago yet we still know so much. Now that I have read this article, I now understand how dinosaurs would have looked like at the time and how scientists are able to figure this out.

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